Replace slogans with specifics. Show screenshots, quantify outcomes, and narrate real-world context. When Jordan swapped fluffy benefits for one detailed before-and-after, replies started with "This is exactly our issue." Empathy opens the door; clarity keeps people reading; authority seals confidence. Draft one message that solves a tiny pain today, and ship it.
Avoid tricks. Promise one concrete benefit, time to value, or a surprising insight. Pair with a preheader that completes the thought. A/B test curiosity against clarity, then segment winners by persona. Nora’s best performer simply said, "Cut onboarding questions by 32% with this checklist." Honesty plus utility beats gimmicks across months, not minutes.
Echo the same idea in different forms: email tells the story, in-app banner cues the next step, retargeted ad reinforces social proof. Keep voice, value, and call to action aligned. Gus created a three-touch motif around "time saved," and prospects recognized it everywhere. Consistency compounds trust while avoiding copy-paste fatigue.